Dedicated launch copy for Recess mood drinks Sparkling water collection

The following images below are screenshots taken from the actual Google doc in which the copy was written. The content below precedes the launch of the popular mood drink collection produced by the company.

My opinion of this copy is not in complete support. I feel this format would've been better for high ticket items (which somewhat applies to the Recess Sparkling water collection, since it's pretty pricey for a can of soda- and a carton is worth, in my country, almost two months of minimum wage.)

If you're running a high ticket service like fitness or training, this format would be perfect for you.