An Instagram ad copy as winning lead magnet for weekly Women's body shaping advice column

Every instagram post, to be considered clicking at all, must be flashy. Hence, the approach. This is the actual Google doc file for the ad.

Fitness is a cherished niche for me in my emails, for both men and women. (Thought of sharing other emails when greed gor the better of me.)

This ad in particular, is unique in its gentle reference to stars existing on that very platform. 8/10.

Thoughts, anyone?